What do we have so far?

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    What do we have so far?

    Post by Hawke777 on Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:29 am

    What, in the way of writing, do you have so far? Do you have character bios? Do you have a core idea? Or is this all you've got?:

    You are a green-haired kid. You are about 15 years old. You can choose your own name, completely from scratch, so I'm just going to call this kid BoB. BoB wakes up one day, and goes to talk to his grandpa, who he lives with. BoB's grandpa gives BoB a sword and a cloak, and instructs BoB to take the cloak to a friend of his (Dana) that lives in a village not too far from the one they live in.

    BoB get there, and the place is completely empty. The only person there is Anna who is Dana's apprentice. She decides to tell BoB where Dana lives, and follow BoB there to make sure that BoB doesn't get lost.

    At Dana's house, she takes the cloak, and tells BoB to tell his grandpa thanks. Then she tells BoB that she's 500 years old... and to watch out for mysterious holes near his town. You can choose to make BoB go back to his grandpa, but if you don't, it doesn't matter. He only gives you some money.

    There's a hole near your town, and in it, is this guy who freaks out BoB. That guy is Gio, the Technology God, who will be more important later...

    ..::10 Years Later::..

    BoB is now about 25, and has a 5-year-old daughter named Kiki. He's married to Holly, a girl you see walking around the village at the start of the game. BoB's wife tells him about a fighting class being held at Centra City, a city that is on a peninsula far south of BoB's village.

    You go there, and on the way, BoB finds a villagte being plagued by frequent monster attacks. Save the town, and talk to the mayor. When you do, he informs you that there's a tower north of the village that is producing all these monsters, and that you've been elected to go fight the evil force behind this mess.

    The tower requires you to fight 20 monsters before you can get to the top.

    Now BoB has to cross some mountains that block the way to Centra City. In the mountains, BoB needs to fight 15 monsters before he can move a boulder that is blocking the way to leave.

    Then, a monster pretending to be a human appears and tells you about a very scary monster. Than, he turns into a "scary monster."

    In Centra City, there's lots to do, there's a casino, a mall, and a warehouse. And of course, the sword place. There's also a guy who wants to sell you a boat, but won't because he thinks you need tougher friends. In the Sword Place, an old guy named Sensei makes BoB fight 4 other guys, then he joins BoB.

    Once the old guy has joined you, he says that you should buy the boat and show it to your wife. When you get to your house, your wife gives you a letter to take to her friend.

    You get to her friend's house in the middle of the desert, and you find the guy writing a letter to your wife, trying to sell her Mona Vie. You're mad at him for even trying such a thing so you fight him.

    Then, you leave his house, and there's a hole by it. Oh, boy. In the hole is a dark cave that has an old temple at the end of it. At the back of the old temple is a obelisk (that's what it's called, right?). When you talk to the obelisk, Shin, the Nature Goddess, comes out of it, and explains that the evil Technology God is trying to take over the world with his evil powers. She takes you to a topical island, where a guy gives you a big boat. Then some of Centra's military force takes you down, mistaking you for a ship from the enemy's side.

    BoB dies, and is sent to the underworld, where he must help the undead do errands.

    In the process of doing errands, BoB finds out it' been 10 years since he died, and now the world he once knew is a wasteland.

    After that, BoB finally reaches the Ghost King, and the Ghost King promises to bring BoB back to life....

    If he is successful in haunting a church.

    After haunting the church, BoB gets a stone from the Ghost King that allows him to go back to the underworld at any time...

    When he comes back, he goes back to his house, and his wife and daughter both miss him, but they think he is an impostor, posing as BoB exactly 10 years after the day he died.

    BoB goes to Gio's fortress to get rid of the guy that screwed up his life.

    But when he gets there, Gio isn't. Instead, Shin's sister Alice is there, keeping the world a wintry wasteland.

    At the very top of Gio's fortress is a crystal that allows passage through time.

    BoB uses the crystal to go back to the city where he met the old guy.
    The old guy explains that after the boat was sunk, a young woman with blue hair towed him and the remains of the boat back to the city, where he got it repaired.

    The old guy is willing to go with BoB back to BoB's house.

    When you get there, you arrive just in time to see Shin explaining to BoB's wife what happened, and that BoB died.

    Then, when you walk through the door, BoB's wife gets really mad at Shin, and kicks her out.
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    Re: What do we have so far?

    Post by PPM on Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:15 am

    I have a little more than that, and if you're Chibichan, I already PM'd you that. ^_^

    I just have to make a post here with the updated plot. :p
    I have yet to add character bios, and if by core idea, you mean what I'm expecting to happen at the end, then, yes.
    I have a vague idea of what will happen.
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    Re: What do we have so far?

    Post by DarthPika on Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:40 pm

    Then please post what your idea is so we can help you with it. BTW, did I ever mention that in addition to being able to write music, I am quite a good writer? Razz
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    Re: What do we have so far?

    Post by PPM on Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:59 pm

    OMZG. Surprised

    I have such talented people helping me! ^_^
    I'll post the main plot in a few minutes.

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